Nicoles poem

Whilst experimenting on the shrinking machine,one of the scientists acciently pressed the shrink button that shrank every living thing within a ten metre radius of it,whilst he was trying to hold on to the side, the scientist clumsily knocked his orbeez off the desktop meaning that the orbeez went flying and one smashed the lightbulb.

2 thoughts on “Nicoles poem

  1. Wll done Nicole! I ejoyed your story this week, I agree with Mr Walker you should have written even more, as you have done a great job with the prompt.Your story is very interesting and I’d like to know what happened next.
    I really like your word ‘orbeez’ and how your describe the scientist ‘clumisly’ knocking it over.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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